The Peer Session 1

Item Yes/No Interesting lead / Headline / Summary No/No/Yes Who / When / What / Where / How Yes The interesting extent of the content ( from 1 to 5)  4 Other sources Yes Special angle Yes The tension of the content& ending No Details (spelling, grammar…) Yes
The following are the comments my group members gave to me:
1. The lead and headline are not attractive 2. The content should have the turning point 3. The pictures should be bigger  Therefore, I did my best to incorporate these three points in the revision to make the news better and interesting: 1. Put the description of the special effects and opera's movements; think out another headline 2. Mention the decline of Taiwan's opera 3. Make the pictures more bigger