Circle Lenses: How Long have You Made Eye Contact without True Eyes? (Extra Revision)

In Taiwan, May 29, 2013


 Circle lenses make eyes much bigger
(source:  http://big5.chinabroadcast.cn/
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3765s3987937.htm)

                                                                                       

-- Flimsy layers change your appearance,

 and build the confidence in your mind--

When experiencing the change from unhandy eyeglasses to ordinary contact lenses, people who want to be more beautiful find out the new fashion: circle lenses.

Nowadays, more and more people with high prescription, especially young girls, choose to wear circle lenses to make eyes look much bigger.

Peer influences have played a central role. “When seeing my classmates wearing circle lenses, I started to wear circle lenses,” stated Ms. Chen, a freshman of NCU who wore the maxi skirt with curly long hair, from which we can know she is a trendy. “And I am used to wearing circle lenses. I have no sense of security without wearing circle lenses.”

“When wearing circle lenses, I feel my eyes becoming bright and piercing,” declared Ms. Huang, the 19-year-old student in NCU. “But, compared with common contact lenses, circle lenses easily make my eyes dry.”

Although people know that wearing circle lenses is harmful to eyes, many people still wear circle lenses. Being more beautiful is humans’ natural instinct, so everyone keeps pursuing advanced methods to make him or her more beautiful.

We cannot keep people from wearing circle lenses. However, think about how long you have made eye contact without true eyes!

The Peer Session 2

1. Emphasize the reason of the description of the interviewee's appearance, like we can know she is a trendy from her clothes

→ Accept

I put this additional imformation behind the the description of the interviewee's appearance

2. Put more picture

→ Reject

Because of the typesetting, I think one picture is enough   

3. Don't put the source under the picture

→ Reject

I think it  is clear to know the picture's source

4. Emphasize the ending

→ Accept

I emphasize the point by making "true eyes" become red  

Circle Lenses: How Long have You Made Eye Contact without True Eyes? (Submission)

In Taiwan, May 26, 2013

Circle lenses make eyes much bigger
(source:  http://big5.chinabroadcast.cn/
gate/big5/gb.cri.cn/30944/2013/01/11/
3765s3987937.htm)

-- Flimsy layers change your appearance,

   and build the confidence in your mind--  

When experiencing the change from unhandy eyeglasses to ordinary contact lenses, people who want to be more beautiful find out the new fashion: circle lenses.

Nowadays, more and more short-sighted people, especially young girls, choose to wear circle lenses to make eyes look much bigger.

Some people are influenced by peers. “When seeing my classmates wearing circle lenses, I started to wear circle lense,” stated Ms. Chen, a freshman of NCU who wore the maxi skirt with curly long hair, from which we can know she is a trendy. “And I am used to wearing circle lenses. I have no sense of security without wearing circle lenses.”

“When wearing circle lenses, I feel my eyes becoming bright and piercing,” declared Ms. Huang, the 19-year-old student in NCU. “But, compared with common contact lenses, circle lenses easily make my eyes dry.”

Although people know that wearing circle lenses is harmful to eyes, many people still wear circle lenses. Being more beautiful is humans’ natural instinct, so everyone keeps pursuing advanced methods to make self more beautiful.

We cannot keep people from wearing circle lenses. However, think about how long you have made eye contact without true eyes!

Circle Lenses: How Long have You Made Eye Contact without True Eyes? (Revision)

In Taiwan, May 21, 2013                              

Circle lenses make eyes much bigger
(source:  http://big5.chinabroadcast.cn/
gate/big5/gb.cri.cn/30944/2013/01/11/
3765s3987937.htm)

 --A flimsy layer changes your appearance,

and builds the confidence in your mind--

    When experiencing the change from unhandy eyeglasses to ordinary contact lenses, people who want to be more beautiful find out the new fashion: circle lenses.

    Nowadays, it is usual to see short-sighted people wearing contact lenses. More and more short-sighted people choose to wear circle lenses to make eyes look much bigger.

    Some people are influenced by peers. “When seeing my classmates wearing circle lenses, I started to wear circle lenses,” stated Ms. Chen, a freshman of NCU who wore the maxi skirt with curly long hair. “And I am used to wearing circle lenses. I have no sense of security without wearing circle lenses.”

    “When wearing circle lenses, I feel my eyes becoming bright and piercing,” declared Ms. Huang, the 19-year-old student in NCU. “But, compared with common contact lenses, circle lenses easily make my eyes dry.”

    Although people know that wearing circle lenses is harmful to eyes, many people still wear circle lenses. Being more beautiful is humans’ natural instinct, so everyone keep pursuing advanced methods to make self be more beautiful.

    We cannot keep people from wearing circle lenses. However, think about how long you have made eye contact without true eyes!

Circle Lenses: How Long have You Made Eye Contact without True Eyes?




Circle lences make eyes much bigger

(source: http://big5.chinabroadcast.cn/
gate/big5/gb.cri.cn/30944/2013/01/11/
3765s3987937.htm)

 In Taiwan, May 1, 2013
 
  --A flimsy layer changes your appearance,
   and builds the confidence in your mind--
   
    When experiencing the change from unhandy eyeglasses to ordinary contact lenses, people who want to be more beautiful find out the new fashion: circle lenses.
   
    Nowadays, it is not unusual to see short-sighted people wearing contact lenses. More and more short-sighted people choose to wear circle lenses to make eyes look much bigger.

    Some people are influenced by peers. “When seeing my classmates wearing circle lenses, I started to wear circle lenses,” stated Ms. Chen, a freshman of NCU who wore the maxi skirt with curly long hair. “And I am used to wearing circle lenses. I have no sense of security without wearing circle lenses.”

    “When wearing circle lenses, I feel my eyes becoming bright and piercing,” declared Ms. Huang, the 19-year-old student in NCU. “But, compared with common contact lenses, circle lenses easily make my eyes dry.”

    Although people know that wearing circle lenses is harmful to eyes, many people still wear circle lenses. Making self become more beautiful is humans’ natural instinct, so keeping pursuing advanced methods to become prettier is a certain goal.

    We cannot keep people from wearing circle lenses. However, think about how long you have made eye contact without true eyes!