The Peer Session 2

1. Emphasize the reason of the description of the interviewee's appearance, like we can know she is a trendy from her clothes

→ Accept

I put this additional imformation behind the the description of the interviewee's appearance

2. Put more picture

→ Reject

Because of the typesetting, I think one picture is enough   

3. Don't put the source under the picture

→ Reject

I think it  is clear to know the picture's source

4. Emphasize the ending

→ Accept

I emphasize the point by making "true eyes" become red